My Cats
MY CATS
It was a spring morning when the cats were born, so tiny and so cute. My son immediately picked one of them; it was a yellow tabby which we named Tiger. He looked like a little tiny tiger. I picked another one; it was a black and white with long hair. He looked so funny because he had a black patch on his right eye, and black spots all over his body including his tail. He also had the right rear leg black and the other one white. We named him Blackie but sometimes I call him Pinkie Nose. So, we have two feline boys, they are all adult now. Tiger is a big smart cat and the boss, while Blackie is shy and sweet.
SOL
posted by SOL @ 6:57 PM
3 Comments:
You describe the cats well and give us some information to help us see them. I like your description of the black and white cat because you give a good idea what you mean when you write that "he looked so funny".
In a couple of places, you have run-ons. 1)"We named him Blackie but sometimes I call him Pinkie Nose."
which should be written.
"We named him Blackie, but sometimes I call him Pinkie Nose."
2)"So, we have two feline boys, they are all adult now."
which should be written
"So, we have two feline boys; they are all adults now."
YOU MOST LIKE CATS ALOT
TOO MANY CATS
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